Lyrics romanization problems

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Fyren
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Lyrics romanization problems

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These are probably just minor typos since the Japanese on the left is correct, but here goes:

Getsumei Fuuei
Line 2: "yasashi" should be "yasashisa"
Line 4: "kodoku ame" should be "kodoku no ame"
Lines 5 and 12: "tousu" at the ends should probably be "toosu" but I guess you could argue about romanization styles

Also, the spacing in the Japanese for lines 5 and 13 is a little odd with the spaces after the この体s. It might also be better to space out the romanization on the right in a manner similar to the Japanese instead of capitalizing things (which looks odd to me, but that's just me).

Shihouka:
Line 18: "ga" should be "wa"

"hora" on line 11 is capitalized (because of the spacing in the Japanese on the left) but "kikoeru" on 19 isn't (but it's spaced on the left). This one's a minor minor problem, heh. Again, I think neither should be capitalized anyway.

-Fyren
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